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Old 09-05-2011, 07:08 AM
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View Post Originally Posted by Zoeadventurebear1052
Try doing a different font for be yourself. Other than that, it's good. (:

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Fankyou for the critique C:
It's really hard to see the 'i' maybe put the text in a line going upwards from the bottom left corner to the top left? (:
View Post Originally Posted by cthebay
cute(: I think the text "be yourself" should be smaller & centered intead on so big cuz like you kno how pictures can be streched, well the words look streched, (if that makes any sence)
but i love the text on the bottom
Haha, thats because I did stretch it but I see what you mean, I might change it if I remember xD Thanks. :3
View Post Originally Posted by MistyBear61
Ooh nice, not sure about the font for 'there's no one better' the r's look like e's xD Maybe add a colour splash to her hair?
THEY DON'T TO ME. xD
View Post Originally Posted by AbbeyAdorable9215
blehhh. I'm quite proud, this is my first go at this sort of animation.
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Really cewwl but I'm not sure about the exit of the text, maybe do a wipe from left to right or just fade it out?
View Post Originally Posted by puppyluv8
that's what i mean.
xD

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this better?
I love that. I don't really have any critique /:
View Post Originally Posted by awesomechic
Flaunt. :3
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Slower
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There is a lot of background left around your buildabearville charrie, when using the magic wand tool you may need to rub out the excess lines.
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Old 09-05-2011, 07:44 AM
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I made two typographies, but im not sure which one looks best, and
i think they need critique. c: The gif kinda became bad quality, but when i made it,
it had good quality.

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Old 09-05-2011, 07:57 AM
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View Post Originally Posted by AngelBlossom
I made two typographies, but im not sure which one looks best, and
i think they need critique. c: The gif kinda became bad quality, but when i made it,
it had good quality.

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beautiful I love it!!Great quality!
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Old 09-05-2011, 08:08 AM
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View Post Originally Posted by AngelBlossom
I made two typographies, but im not sure which one looks best, and
i think they need critique. c: The gif kinda became bad quality, but when i made it,
it had good quality.

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Soo Prettyyy xD
Although some of the text is hard to readd

View Post Originally Posted by puppyluv8
nice but i think the spacing with happy and birthday is a little too much because the rest of them have lower spacing and it just looks uneven xD


the character and text is kinda bad quality some how :/
and maybe change the use of color
and see there's like some black around the character
but nice [:
thankss for the advicee xD
Im too lazy to fix it noww but thankss

View Post Originally Posted by awesomechic
Okay, i dont see how my font got all fuzzy? but, i totally agree. thanks for the critique



i like it.
Happy BIRTHDAY!!! XD
THANKSS xDD
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Old 09-05-2011, 08:37 AM
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I made 2 flaunt.

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Old 09-05-2011, 09:07 AM
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I can't read part of the text so fix that maybe

View Post Originally Posted by AngelBlossom
I made two typographies, but im not sure which one looks best, and
i think they need critique. c: The gif kinda became bad quality, but when i made it,
it had good quality.

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Old 09-05-2011, 10:15 AM
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View Post Originally Posted by AbigailAwesome119
I made 2 flaunt.

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Nice,but simple. The fonts don't match,honestly. Some of the text looks cut off,and just try a different font,and maybe some different colorization,but other than that its really good..
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Old 09-05-2011, 10:50 AM
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View Post Originally Posted by MistyBear61
That's awesome The only critique I could think of is maybe make the 'W' on 'When' capital and a comma after 'learn to'? xD I COULDN'T THINK OF ANYTHING ELSE OKAY? xD I love the font you used and the speed is good



Watch the cutting out of the character, you can see black lines around it. Use an eraser and just go over them so you get a softer feel as well. Maybe you could make 'fullest' expand a bit when the 'Life' animation gets to E?
I like all letters lowercased, actually. xD
and about the comma... i don't think it would be after learn to, maybe love?
i'll see how that works thanks for the critique[:

and thanks alice for the comment. xD
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Old 09-05-2011, 11:04 AM
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View Post Originally Posted by AngelBlossom
I made two typographies, but im not sure which one looks best, and
i think they need critique. c: The gif kinda became bad quality, but when i made it,
it had good quality.

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Wow, I don't know what it is but I love those, the text is so.. cool. xD What font is that? Anyway the 'know you aren't thinking' is a little hard to read, maybe add a faint outline?
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I made 2 flaunt.

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They're really cute, next time add a texture to give more to look at or a gradient/colouring type thing, Oh and I noticed you put 'Lost and Abandon' was it meant to be abandoned? c;

Oh yeah, that's fine Ameh. xD
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Old 09-05-2011, 11:32 AM
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View Post Originally Posted by AngelBlossom
I made two typographies, but im not sure which one looks best, and
i think they need critique. c: The gif kinda became bad quality, but when i made it,
it had good quality.

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I love it Some of the text blends into the background though so maybe put a low opacity box behind it?
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