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Amazing story! (:
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This is such a powerful piece of writing! It could be a real book, I bet. You are very talented, Alexandria. I love all that you have to offer in this story, and I can't wait for more! =)
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Why, thank you very much! (:

Chapter Two
Duke of Sheymire


He stood on his balcony, grinning smugly as he gazed across the kingdom. This was going to be a glorious day indeed. After sixteen years of hinting around and asking in fun, he was finally going to officially ask Queen Catherine marry to him. He had wanted to twenty years ago, but his lousy brother beat him to it. Catherine was supposed to be his wife in the first place. They had both courted her sometime in their life, but he supposed that when it came down to choosing which suitor, king won over duke. Today, however, would be his shining moment. He dressed in his most exquisite ensemble, and headed through the enormous castle corridors. He knocked firmly on the royal quarter's door. The queen's long-time handmaid answered, still in her nightgown. "May I speak with her highness?" The maid nodded drowsily, opening the door wide enough for him to enter. The queen was also still in her night clothes, but she wore a finely decorated robe. "Your highness," he began, bowing deeply. She looked at him, rubbing her long, dark braid of hair. "I have an important question to ask you," he continued, taking one of her hands. She glanced at her maid. "Catherine, will you marry me?" Her eyes widened, and she stammered. "Lucas.. I'm honored, but.. I'm afraid I will have to decline." His face dropped. "I love you as a dear friend, or brother," she continued, placing a hand on his shoulder, "But obviously not in the same way you love me." He calmly removed her hand, and abruptly left the room. "Reject me," he grumbled. "Good morning, Duke Sheymire," a servant smiled as they walked past. "Duke Sheymire," he said with disgust, "THAT'S ALL I'LL EVER BE!"

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Great story! :] Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thanks, Abigail. (:
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Poor little Dukie! xD
Fantastic work! =)
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Chapter Three
The Singing Maiden with an Iron Fist


A few days later, Amaryllis was out in the forest again, picking wild flowers and singing softly. "Little bird, little bird, fly through the trees," she sang in a perfect pitch, "Little bird, little bird, let me fly with thee." She continued through, mimicking the birds' chirps, and laughing as they looked at her with almost confused expressions. After a little while longer, she stopped at the stream to rest and get a cool drink. As she bent down to the water, she heard twigs snapping underfoot in the distance. Whatever it was, it was too big to be a deer or any other woodland creature. She quickly dismissed it as a local hunter and went about with her song. She heard it again, only this time, it sounded a few feet away. She froze. If it was a local, they would have already said something. The worst scenario popped into her mind: robbers. Her heart thundered as she grabbed a big piece of wood for defense. The person cautiously walked through the bushes, and their head met her club. They hit the stream with splash. Only then did Amaryllis recognize who it was. "Prince Jacob," she whispered. She'd hit a prince with a big chunk of a tree! The prince was from the neighboring kingdom, and she had seen him once when he and his father had rode through. Panicking in the thought of someone finding him like this, she locked her arms under his and drug him back to the cottage. "Mother! Mother!" she called frantically. Annamaria gasped in shock when she came to the door. "Amaryllis! What are you doing with Prince Jacob?!" She looked embarrassed as her mother helped her inside. "Well, I guess he heard me singing, and was trying to find out who it was. I got scared, thinking it was a robber, and sort of hit him on the head..." She offered a horrible attempt of a smile, earning an exasperated look from Annamaria. "Amaryllis, what I have told." She was cut off as the prince groaned. "HE CAN'T WAKE UP NOW!" she screamed, popping the young man over the head with the broom. "Mama!" Amaryllis exclaimed, half-wanting to laugh. "Get him on your father's old cot he used for hunting. We'll have to heal him quickly."
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Oh snap! She K.O.ed a prince! xD
Great work! =)
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Haha, yeah.. xD

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