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Old 06-02-2012, 01:44 PM
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I hear your hushed voice, whisper.
What ois Personification?
Whell, I shall tell you.
POersonification is when you give an inanimate object human futures.
Lets, give it a go!

The waves sprinted across the sand.
Wow! Tha' good!
One thing to NOT do.
Is to say, this...
The tree stood tall.
Well, trees always stand tall, lol.
So, you need to be improvising...
all the time.

Here is a poem I WROTE about springtime!


Hushed Whispers.

Hushed Whispers follow me,
Through the woods and up the oak tree,
All they say is spring is nigh,
Then they dissapear and say goodbye,
I know its true,
I know its right,
Its as clear as can be on a summer's night.

There is more, I cannot remember.
But see.
The hushed whispers is the wind, and its telling me spring is coming.
I hope you've learnt something today, and well if you haven't.
oh well.
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Old 06-02-2012, 02:02 PM
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I am a huge fan of writing. I have spent a lot of time, composing poems and books, and I must say that your poem was beautiful. Personification is by far my favorite component of figurative language. When metaphors and similes just don't do the thing. I know personification won't fail me any time soon. That poem was outstanding. Your use of language, elevated style, and choice of words were alluring and hands-down amazing. One thing I must admit is that I was a bit confusion when I found this thread in this particular category, but then I caught on to your creativity. You created a guide and answered a question through the use of a poem. It was very original and creative of you to utilize a thread category. I think I might have just learned a thing or two about the personification and am thankful to you for it! [=
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Why, thank you.
If you would like to read my whole poem, click this.



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Why, thank you.
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I read the entire poem and I think I reread it too! It was just beautiful. I think I actually found a whole new meaning to spring time. Some of us hardly consider the beauty of spring, being quite engrossed in our vacation time away from school. It was a beautifully written poem and I hope you make one for summer, winter, and fall because I know I would enjoy it if you did! [=
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I wrote it at school c:
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Thanks for posting. This is a very nice poem.
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