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Old 01-03-2009, 05:30 PM
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CH 1 ------ Lunch


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"Victory!" Madlyn Karsh exclaimed on a friday afternoon at Marsh Feild Lake Middle School because she snagged the last brownie.As she walk to her cafitera table she saw Troy Walker her biggest crush in the whole entire world. She stared blankly as him until he walked past her.As she sat down her best friends Lola Benshund and Maggie Farlay were eating their Pepporoni pizza with extra cheese as Lola chewed her food she mumbled "Haw Madlyn huw lit joing? " "SWALLOW !!!!"cried Maggie... Madlyn's other best friend. "I am ok except a bit nervous for my dance compettion next week " said Madlyn "You'll do fine " said Lola " Hey there is Nicole" said maggie" Nicole come sit with us" shouted maggie .So Nicole came and sat down at the table. Madyn though about something ...Nicole was her dance comppetion enimy!





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anyone like it ..i guess not
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I love that she's a dancer! I want to see a new chapter...I'm curious Her enemy..
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Your story reminds me of a book I bought called The Babysitting Wars. It was such a good book, I read it 3 times throughout the year.
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When Madlyn got home she went straight up to her room. Her dance class started at 5:00 so she had 2 hours to think about things. She quietly mumbled to herself " What am I supposed to say to her am I supposed to tell her that i am your dance compettion enimy?Or should i keep it a secret and she will just find out that day? "oh well i really have to get my home work done ...... math science..art smoking chicken. Finally i am finished my homework now.........OH NO it 4:30 i have to get changed for ballet contemperary and hip hop also jazz.So I brushed out my blond and browny har put it into a pony and sliped on my leatord.


"Honey are you ready ?" said mom

"yep, let me get my shoes mom" I called from my bed room

I hoped into the car and i was off to class
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Your story reminds me of a book I bought called The Babysitting Wars. It was such a good book, I read it 3 times throughout the year.
really? well wow i think
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really? well wow i think
Yeah, the name of the school is even the same.
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HA HA HA i named it because when i was a little girl i would go camping with my family and we would go to a camp site called marsh feild lake
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at first when I read it it was overwhelming but when i read it again i like it
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i am glad you like it

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