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Old 08-07-2008, 09:54 AM
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The Beach



The hot sand between your toes
The salty smell in the air
The children splashing in the water
The sandcastles decorated with shells
The beach, what isn't there to love?
The tiny crabs and clams burrowing in the sand
The sand feels squishy near the water
I will always love the beach
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Old 08-07-2008, 09:58 AM
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Wow! You are all great at writing poems! I can't write a poem at all!!!
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Old 08-07-2008, 10:34 AM
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Invisible
Based on the 2007-2008 school year for me

When I try to talk to my crush,
He always leaves in a rush.
When I walk in the hall,
People stumple into me and fall.
It annoying when people say nikki
They mean the other one, who is very icky
In school, Only my friends see me
Other people say "Who is she
Everyone in school sees me invisible
With my friends, I'm actually visible


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Old 08-07-2008, 10:35 AM
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Thanks Juliet!! Great Poem!
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Old 08-07-2008, 11:05 AM
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These poems are going great! Keep them coming!
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Old 08-07-2008, 11:40 AM
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Smile Here my coolest poem!

Grasshopper Pie
I'm Grandma favorite helper.
You should have seen her eyes
When i brought six grasshoppers
To make grasshopper pies!

I knew she'd want a closer look-
I opened up the lid
I think those 'hoppers got confused-
They all hopped out and hid!

One jumped in the pantry
And one jumped in the sink.
One jumped into Grandma's cup
And tried to take a drink.

One went for the chocolate cake.
Another found the bread.
Another one liked Grandma-
he jumped right on her head!

Grandma sure loves grasshoppers
As i could plainly tell.
Why, she got so excited,
She gasped and nearly fell.

I climbed acrosss the counters
And scaled the pantry wall.
I hopped and jumped around the room
till i had caught them all.

And that's when Grandma told me-
And my Grandma never lies-
There really are no grasshoppers
Inside grasshoppers pies!
I stodd in shock and disbelief
(The grasshoppers just sighed.)
Then Grandma told my grasshoppers
To go and play outisde.

Then she took a piecrust,
Scooped in some mints ice cream
And made the best grasshoppers pie-
With me on Grandma's team!

I'm Grandma favorite helper-
Next day, I came back to bake.
I brought a bag of marbles
to make a marble cake!
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Old 08-07-2008, 11:46 AM
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Sorry Glopesfire, That poem is disqualified because it is not an original poem..

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Old 08-07-2008, 03:19 PM
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What a wonderful idea for a contest, I love poetry!
You all have so much talent
But I'm hesitant to share my personal poems, they're kind of deep with symbolism and not to be shared lol. Perhaps i'll write a simple one for this contest soon. (:
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Old 08-07-2008, 03:33 PM
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View Post Originally Posted by voodoochil3
The Beach


i love this poem

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Old 08-07-2008, 04:10 PM
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i have another poem here it is:


Can't catch my breath

i woke up in the middle of the night
i gasp for air,i tried and tried
but nothing seems to fight
to catch my breath

i walk around the room
trying to get air
''this is just not fair''
i said in a whisper.
i prayed and prayed
the get some air

suddenly in a flash,
my eyes opened,
i see light,
and i didn't have to fight
to catch my breath.
i got a smell of air,
and now this is just
very fair.
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