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Old 08-07-2008, 04:40 PM
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Here is mine -

WWE

WWE is wresteling,
WWE is cool,
WWE is intresting,
But some of the people there,
Are complete fools.

They cheat, they lie,
They fake cry,
They want to be cool,
But they turn out a fool!

Most of them are nice,
Most of them are popular,
But sometimes the guards,
Can't stop them.

Sometimes they get hurt,
And they even die,
But one this is for sure,
This poem is not a lie!!!!!! (Seriously.)

LOL if you watch WWE you know what I am talking about!!!!

It just popped into my head....thought I'd try.
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Old 08-07-2008, 04:41 PM
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everyone very insipring and funny peoms!
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Old 08-07-2008, 04:44 PM
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Guys I love this contest I love writing poems here is mine

I took a rock and
Threw it at a sock.
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Old 08-07-2008, 06:09 PM
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Here's a quick one about hope:


When it's gray and gloomy
and the skies pour again and again,
Have you ever distrusted
that the sun would shine once more?

Now and again the years bring cloudy skies,
and icy, bitter days.
But these too, will melt away,
below hope’s intense and warming rays.
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Old 08-07-2008, 06:35 PM
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View Post Originally Posted by WinterGlitter
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Hope u all like this! Hope u all think this is funny too! LOL
I think this poem is so funny! It doesn't make sense at some places, but still LOL!
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Old 08-07-2008, 07:36 PM
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Build-a-Bearville

Babv is so much fun
So much fun babv is
When I look at the Bearville Times
As the tension rises,
I say Wow! They are so good at surprises!
From Shea Megale
To ChloeRocks
From Adorable Bear
To Irresistable Dog
From Pie Eating Contest
To Shake Your Honey
Babv is so much fun
So much fun babv is!

Yeah... I just thought of that from the top of my head.. LOL! Oh well!


MY 100TH POST!

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Old 08-08-2008, 10:47 AM
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Here is my poem..I hope you like it..

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Brown as Sugar
Yellow as bloom

Your Morning Face
Is a glittering Fright
What is this fright?
A dark one deep down?

It is as ugly as vain
Please Keep Sound..
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Old 08-08-2008, 11:47 AM
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A Feeling

I can taste salt in my mouth,
getting saltier each second.
I can smell nothing,
my nose is wet and blocked.

Everything I see is blur,
'cause my vision is blocked.
Sharp voices thrown at me,
as though hit by a thousand stones.

Piercing me in my heart,
The poison is spreading... so slowly.
As I sit at a corner knees up close,
I wonder where I have gone wrong.

I was using the five senses to describe a feeling. It is...

[SPOILER="spoiler"]Sadness (crying)[/SPOILER]

Here's another:

Pierced by a poisoned needle,
the pain spreads... so slowly.
Like bitter gourd,
the bitterness... stays...

Like a lemon,
I feel so... so sour.
Many faces showing...
Opposites of a smile

Hearing cries of sorrow,
the sound... stays in my ears...
As though stabbed by a thousand knifes,
The pain is excruciating

The feeling: [SPOILER="spoiler"]Pain[/SPOILER]

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Old 08-08-2008, 01:19 PM
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This one I wrote for school. It was for my Lit. homework and I was supposed to write a poem about a Fable. And here's how it went:

Doth the Fox

The fox was clear,
He had much wanted that deer,
But instead focused; mouth agape,
At the delicious bunch of fruit called a grape,
He jumped and even did a hop,
But no, that fox did not stop,
He turned around, oh so sneer,
And said "It's not worth it,
I'm outta here!"
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Old 08-08-2008, 01:21 PM
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I am so so glad you guys are sending so many poems!!! I might have to pick some judges to help me..
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