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Old 07-14-2013, 08:18 PM
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"So um, you kind of step to the left and uh," Jimmy was having a hard time teaching me how to ballroom dance, I couldn't help but laugh at him, "I thought you said you would show me? Seems to me you don't even know how to do it yourself!" I stated. He raised his face from our feet to my face and the look on his face was utter confusion. "Well, I did know how to..." he just started to scratch his head and think. "It's fine you know, I don't have to know how to ballroom dance." I said, wiping my sweaty palms on the shorts I was wearing. He was just standing there silently, which made it awkward, "Well I should probably get going, I'm a bit hungry and it's about time I left this building, After all, I wasn't even supposed to be here, right?", "Oh, yeah, well I guess I'll see you another time then..unless you wanted to kind of go eat something...together...?" he replied in a quiet voice. I was kind of surprised but I said yes, to which his face lit up, another surprise. "I'll just go change and meet you somewhere okay?" I told him, "Yeah, great!" he replied.

I need to finish this as it's late and I honestly can't finish it right now but I wanted to have something up one the 1 year anniversary.

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Old 07-31-2013, 03:44 PM
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Keep writing! You're amazing at it.
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Thank you so so much, Jeanine!

I've been busy but I'll work on another chapter ASAP.
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Okay great!
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Will you update soon? I'm dying to know what happens next.
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Yay, this thread is open again. I can't wait for an update once you get round to it, your writing is amazing. (:
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