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Awesome(:
This reminds me of school. Which i'm not looking forwar too xD
Yeah, me either. : D

{Chapter VIII}
"My favorite color is hot pink!!! Or neon green. Or both!" Carla was telling me a little to loudly as we all walked across the running track in the afternoon sun. "I guess it's good she acts so young when she's older. She'll make the world nicer when we're all old and grumpy. Haha, I hope I'm never like that." I was saying in my head when Jess shouted, "YO, BRAD. OVER HERE.". A guy with dark brown almost black looking hair, tanned skin, dark brown eyes, black plug earrings, cargo pants, red high tops and a varsity jacket came walking over with a smile. I assumed he was Brad. "This here is Clare, she's a newbie here." Jess told him as he stopped right in front of me. "Hey, always welcome. Hope we become friends, I'm Brad," he fell into step next to me as he started chatting while everyone else just whispered their conversations, "What are you into besides performing?". I had to think for a minute before responding, wow. "I like...sports...?" I replied, not quite sure what to say even though I knew myself. "Sports? Nice. You run much?" he asked me. "Do I," I said, "I've done track a zillion times before, and I run three miles 4 times a week in the morning.", "Up for a race then?" he said with a small grin and a glint in his eyes. "I'm always up for a challenge." I said with a wave of my hand and a smile. Probably the first real smile since I've been here, wow. "Three laps around the track. I'll time you," Jim said (dirty blonde is Jim, blonde is Jimmy mainly), "Ready, set, GO!" he yelled at the top of his lungs. That sure attracted attention, tons of kids were coming around. I was running at top speed, Brad was on my heels but I had to lose him, all the cheers (some were for me surprisingly)

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Its going good, Abby! (:
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Its going good, Abby! (:
Yay, thanks Choco! c:

CONTINUATION OF CHAPTER 8.

Jess has an Australian accent, Will, Ed, Jim (dirty blonde hair [see chapter 7]), and Brad have British accents, Jimmy (blonde one [see chapter 7]) has an Irish accent, and Mary has a southern accent.

{Chapter VIII}
"My favorite color is hot pink!!! Or neon green. Or both!" Carla was telling me a little to loudly as we all walked across the running track in the afternoon sun. "I guess it's good she acts so young when she's older. She'll make the world nicer when we're all old and grumpy. Haha, I hope I'm never like that." I was saying in my head when Jess shouted, "YO, BRAD. OVER HERE.". A guy with dark brown almost black looking hair, tanned skin, dark brown eyes, black plug earrings, cargo pants, red high tops and a varsity jacket came walking over with a smile. I assumed he was Brad. "This here is Clare, she's a newbie here." Jess told him as he stopped right in front of me. "Hey, always welcome. Hope we become friends, I'm Brad," he fell into step next to me as he started chatting while everyone else just whispered their conversations, "What are you into besides performing?". I had to think for a minute before responding, wow. "I like...sports...?" I replied, not quite sure what to say even though I knew myself. "Sports? Nice. You run much?" he asked me. "Do I," I said, "I've done track a zillion times before, and I run three miles 4 times a week in the morning.", "Up for a race then?" he said with a small grin and a glint in his eyes. "I'm always up for a challenge." I said with a wave of my hand and a smile. Probably the first real smile since I've been here, wow. "Three laps around the track. I'll time you," Jim said (dirty blonde is Jim, blonde is Jimmy), "Ready, set, GO!" he yelled at the top of his lungs. That sure attracted attention, tons of kids were coming around. I was running at top speed, Brad was on my heels but I had to lose him, all the cheers (some were for me surprisingly) were getting drained out since I was focusing on beating Brad. "See you at the finish line!" he yelled back to me as he was starting his second lap while I was trailing behind him by about 6 seconds. "Don't get to cocky!" I wailed back as I passed him and started my third lap. My hair had become so loose it was getting in my face and sticking to my neck which was dripping with sweat, along with the rest of my body. Brad had come exactly next to me when we were 27 seconds away from finishing. I tasted the salt from my sweat dripping into my mouth as I said, "You...Are...Not...Going...TO...WIIINNNN." I leaped over the finish line and into the grass where I plopped down and just closed my eyes. "I think she's fainted," said Carla, "WHAT SHOULD WE DO, OH NO, NOOOO!", "Calm down, she's just tired, look." Mary said while nudging me with her foot. "I'm still alive," I said in a hoarse voice, turning to brad I gave him a high five, "Nice race, I beat you by 1.3 seconds.", "Ah, we need a rematch some time. You should try out for the track team here, we'd love to have you on it.". I smiled like a 4 year old who had just received some candy, "track team, huh? I did it back at my old school so I guess it wouldn't hurt to do it here too." I replied. "C'mon guys, time to go have supper, I've worked up an appetite just from watching these two." El said. "I think I'll go wash up and see you guys later or something." I said as I started to walk back to the house building. "WAIT. Why not join us for supper?!" Mary said as she started running after me. "Well, I'm kind of filthy and..." I tried to think of an excuse so I could be alone, they seemed to nice to do that to though. "Let her clean up first, I need to also," Brad said to her, "But we'd be more than happy to have you join us." he said kindly. "Well, I'll meet you in the hall 30 minutes from now then, thanks."

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So kind xD
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{Chapter IX}
I was dripping with sweat after that run, ew. I was fidgeting with my key card (those things are so easy to snap, take it from somebody who's had 4 in the same week) when I heard some footsteps behind me. "Who.Is.There." I said as I whipped around. My father always told me to be on my guard, he even had me train for this stuff for some reason. "Nobody who's going to hurt you," said a guy with orange hair, in a basketball uniform, "My name is Jason and I come in peace." Until now he'd had his hands up, now he was doing that weird alien finger thing. "Well, nice to meet you. Excuse me." I said as I hastily shoved the key card into the scanner and shut the door before he could get another word in. "Now to get changed," I said out loud once I walked to the closet, I pressed a button and a HUGE walk in closet was revealed behind screened panels. "OH MY GOSH," I screeched, "AMY WOULD DIE FOR THIS.", Amy was one of my friends back home, she looooooved clothing, shoes, shopping, you name it. After looking over just about everything I decided on a plain white dress with a belt, and a pair of white flats. "Argh, annoying hair." I mumbled as I attempted to put my hair in a bun after changing. The doorbell, at a time like this? Of course. I decided to let my hair down and pull it back in a small clip, "Coming," I yelled on my way to the door. I quickly opened it to find Dan, Jess, and Carla waiting for me. "Hey, you ready," asked Jess, "El and Mary are in Carla's room getting dressed still so come on.", "This is going to be so fun, wait until you see the dining hall!" Carla told me as she followed me inside while I got my phone. "Thanks for coming to pick me up guys, if you hadn't, I'd probably have ended up waiting in the bathrooms or something since I have no clue about anything here.". That sent Carla into fits of laughter and Jess and Dan into some giggles. I just noticed, Carla was in a rainbow dress with some rainbow knee high socks, red Vans, and a rainbow headband, she had also put on some white glasses instead. "Quite colorful Carla, cute!" I commented as we made our way down to Carla's room from which El and Mary were emerging. Dan was wearing a light pink silk dress, a necklace, bracelet, and earrings of pearls, cream heels, and a bun on top that was all curly. Jess had on some black sandals, a black mini skirt, a black tank top, and a yellow bow in her hair which was straight and down. "Shall we go downstairs and eat? I'm starved." El said as she straightened her green sweater which was over her hot pink cami and blue skirt, yellow flats boots made the outfit. Mary had on an orange halter dress with some espadrilles. "You all look really nice." I said before we started taking the stairs down to the lobby. "Thanks, not to shabby yourself." Dan said with a smile that shined from her lip gloss. Carla and Mary started racing down the steps so I thought it would be alright to take the railing like at home. I should have thought about that before I realized I was in a dress, and there were tons of people downstairs. I just shut my eyes and waited for the bottom. I got off to meet the face of Jess who just shook her head with a smile. "Don't worry, you were fine, just don't do it again." Dan whispered in my ear as she linked arms with me and started off towards a whole other room which was filled with people talking and eating. "There they are, they're coming," said El who had slid up next to Dan, "Hey guys!" she said a little loudly as they made their way in and out of the mass of students who were filling up the room. "Hello girls," Jim said with a smile, "We already have a table reserved so let's eat." he proceeded to do a mock bow which made everyone laugh. All the boys were in tuxedos which seemed super extravagant to me but judging by the place I let it go. Dan had let go of me and drifted towards Jim while El was talking with Will, already halfway across the room. I had just begun to think when Carla's voice kicked in, "Jimmy, let's go and order something that's the same. Or two different things, whichever you prefer." I had to stifle a laugh that I felt coming on as she started to drag Jimmy along to the buffet table. "C'mon, let's go Clare." Jess said as she started to follow Ed to our table. I looked for Mary and Brad but finally spotted them making their way to the buffet table alongside Carla and Jimmy. I went and piled my plate high at the buffet instead of following her since you could see everything on the raised platform where the food was. I took a huge plate and filled it with chicken, vegetables, stuffing, Jell-O, desserts, and I grabbed a bottled water as I saved my head from being whacked by somebody's plate. When I came to the table, I felt like throwing all my food out. Everyone except Jimmy had taken smaller portions, I felt like a pig. "Um, I eat a lot...I mean, I like to eat. I mean...," I said as I turned red and sat down with a plop onto my chair, "Oh, never mind." I grumbled almost to myself. As I was cutting my chicken into bite size pieces (the only civilized thing I'd done this whole afternoon it seemed) I felt a nudge under the table from Mary who nodded towards Will once I looked up. "I said, what would you like to do after supper, Clare?" Will asked. "Oh, well. You all can decide since I don't know much about this place. But um, I am kind of tired so I'll probably just go to my room after this if you don't mind," I responded, trying to be firm, "School does start tomorrow, after all, and-" I was interrupted by a voice over the loudspeaker that said, "Students, please push the tables to the sides of the hall, dancing starts in 5 minutes.", "Wow, they even make you dance during meals? Well, it is a performing arts school." I thought to myself as my table was whisked away from me. Great, now I'm going to be super hungry later, two bites of chicken and a carrot will not suffice. Music had started to quietly play in the back round and the lights were dimmed ever so slightly, the students in the meantime were gathering together to start dancing. I decided to sit this one out along the wall with a few other students who were cleaning up a Sprite spill. "The waltz tonight, places, DANCE." said the voice from the loudspeaker again. I looked at everyone marveling at their skills. I spotted Dan and Jim dancing while whispering and laughing, same thing with my other friends, they all had partners and were enjoying themselves. The whole room was filled with music, laughter, murmurs, and fun which was nice. I wasn't dancing so I swiped a cinnamon bun off the buffet table and sat down on the floor in the back with a good view of everything. Carla came rushing over to me as I finished wiping my hands from the sticky yet delicious icing on the bun. "Come dance Clare! I need a break so you can dance with Jimmy," she offered, "Or anybody else who's free.". I wasn't in the perfect mood but she was being super kind so I gave in. "I'd love to dance, thanks for thinking of me Carla," I said which made her smiler and sit down where I was. She whipped out her phone and a Hershey chocolate bar without another word so I walked out, trying to find Jimmy. I started humming along with the music and before I knew it, I was twirling my way across the room, and not bumping into anyone on my way. As I finished a triple twirl, someone caught me and started dancing with me, I couldn't make out their face just yet, then it hit me. Jason. The boy from my hallway. "Oh, hello again," he said in a fake surprised voice, "Fancy meeting you here! Lovely night for dancing, is it not?", "Yes, how did you find me here?" I asked as we passed the entrance and almost hit another couple, "You're easy to spot, being the most gorgeous here of course." He smirked as he said which made me blush to the max so I had to turn away and say, "Even though that isn't true, thank you." the rest of the dance was silent for the most part. I turned my head I saw El and Will sneaking outside through the huge glass doors in the back of the room, wonder where they were going. "May I cut in?" someone asked as we made our way back to the middle of the floor. "Of course," said Jason with a bow to me which made me curtsy, "Goodnight madame.". Why was he so proper?! It was flattering yet embarrassing. I started to dance with my new partner when I realized it was Jimmy. "Oh, hello..." I said while I tried to turn away. Something about him made me get all jumpy inside and turn red. "Enjoying it here?" he asked with a smile that set me at ease for the moment, "Yes, very much so, thank you." I replied. We proceeded to talk about the rest of the school, classes, what we liked to do, etc. He was extremely charming so when the dance was over something inside me was grieving his absence ever so slightly. Not that I was going to let anyone know or anything. Just as I saw Ed coming my way, the music stopped, he stopped short but kept coming anyway. I decided to meet him and we stopped near the entrance of the room at the same time. "You look nice this evening," he complimented, "Thank you, you look very gorgeous yourself," I said with a slight blush and pause, "Wait, I mean handsome, yes, handsome," I corrected myself as he started to smile which made dimples appear even more than before. "We're supposed to go to our rooms once the last song is done, have an escort?" he asked me as I tried to hide my face so he couldn't see how blotchy and red it was. "Oh, well...I believe the girls and I were going to go back to our rooms together," , "But thank you for the offer anyway." I quickly added. Thankfully Dan came up and told Ed we had to go now before things got awkward. "Well goodnight then girls, see you tomorrow." he said with a smile that made my stomach jump. "We all decided to have a sleep-over tonight, want to come?" she asked. "I'd love to, but isn't it a school night?" I half asked half stated, and I wasn't lying about wanting to go, I love sleep-overs. "We're big girls, we can live off two hours of sleep!" she said with a laugh. I readily agreed and soon we were joined by Carla, Mary, and Jess who looked like they had been laughing a lot. "Sleep-over tonight girls, pack your bags!" Dan announced, "We need to decide where to have it though." before she said another word I blurted out, "I'll host! I love hosting sleep-overs. When do we need it ready by?", "10 minute, 20 tops." she said as we all linked arms and raced upstairs to our rooms. "I'll have it ready and just come and get you, kay?" I said. "Sounds good!" they all said in unison. As I raced into my room and started to get out pajamas, snacks, and movies I suddenly thought of my Mother. "She hasn't called at all yet," I said aloud, "I wonder why. I'll call her tomorrow morning before school and tell her everything is going awesome then if I don't hear from her at all tonight.". I finished laying out my sleeping bag with the snacks in front of the flat screen mounted on the wall when I tossed on a tank top and some short shorts before creeping out to the hallway. As I made sure my door didn't slam, I saw El and Will making their way up the stairs super quiet. They were all smiles and holding hands. I figured just as much when I met them. I tried to slip into my room but they were coming so I hid behind a potted plant. "Typical movie hiding spot." I thought. I could just overhear their conversation, "We'll need to get our home-work done first if we want to go out," I heard El say, "Fine, fine. I'll text you later or something than." said Will. I decided to turn away since this felt super awkward but I saw her peck him on the cheek before scattering. Thankfully Dan made her way out of her door as El was coming towards me so she wheeled around and I could make it look like I had just come out too. "Hey El, sleep-over at Clare's. Just get in some PJ's and meet us at her room." she said as Mary, Jess, and Carla all came out, sleeping bags, phones, and snacks in hand. "C'mon guys, it's all ready!" I said excitedly as I put the keycard in the scanner.

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I just want to see what happens next. I can see who you've based some of the characters on, and you've integrated them into the story in a really clever way (:
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Wow, this is brilLiam, Nialla xD
I just want to see what happens next. I can see who you've based some of the characters on, and you've integrated them into the story in a really clever way (:
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Why thank you Mah friend, 'preciate it.

Another chapter later today if I can think of it fast enough lol.
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I'll write another chapter tomorrow or over the weekend.
Sorry for the delay, blame schoolwork. x3
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