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Post Escape; a short story by hannerrs

hey its hannah and it has been since a long time since
i've written so here i go i'm just making it up as i go,
but i'd love it if i could get some critique or some
feedback so thanks c:
and i mean i can always write more but so far
well i don't know really so if you want more
just tell me and then I'll make sure I write more than
I am now so yay xD


E s c a p e


I have this fantastic, unbelievable place inside my head where I can escape my reality of this plain world. I can slip into this place anytime and thank goodness I can because I don't know where I would be without it. I only really visit this place when I'm sad or lonely, but I guess that happens more than I'd like it too.

I'm the type of person that's sad or lonely a lot.

So why not, let's dream. Why can't we just dream whenever, I mean, dreaming is the best thing to do. We can do anything, be anything.

Because right now, the things that I've thought, the things that I've wanted, I'm scared of, I'm scared of what I can be capable of and I need help. Badly.



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It looks good so far (:
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you're back! i love this soo much! (:
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book, i try to be but i can never be sure (:
thanks honey maybe i'll try and write more today idk xD
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book, i try to be but i can never be sure (:
thanks honey maybe i'll try and write more today idk xD
you know what i mean. c:
buuuttt yaayy!
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It started off normal again; I was still not used to how my reality overcame me so quickly that I wouldn't realize I'd be inside my own head until something crazy and unrealistic happened. Before I knew it, I wasn't sitting in the middle of algebra class, I was outside in a pink field.

The pinkness tipped me off, that's how I knew it wasn't real. Lately I've wanted to stop my reality. I want to be normal again, but I was seemingly trapped inside my mind. It was the pink grass. I knew that grass wasn't pink, but I also knew that sometimes I didn't want to go back.

So I let the dream unfold in front of me. Nothing really happened except that gravity didn't seem to play a role at all, nothing was grounded. Plus the sky changed colors, that was all.

I was cruelly snapped out of it when Maria, a classmate of mine, hit me in the arm to get my attention. "Katherina. Answer the question," she spat.

I shuddered. She spat on my arm. "Mr. Kurs. Please forgive me, but I didn't understand your question completely, can you please repeat it?"

"I was just wondering if you found x," he casually said pointing to the whiteboard.

I hadn't but it was most obvious. The question was so simple. I fumbled and wrote the problem down on my notebook. "Just a second please," I asked. My fellow classmates were starting to mock me. Great. Just how I want to start out the year. Plus I haven't even found x.
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I love it! I have my own little world, too.
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This is interesting, keep writing, Hanner. n_n
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