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Old 12-24-2014, 10:44 AM
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Everybody loved Grandma's cooking at Christmas. The fragrant, moist Christmas pudding laced with soaked fruit. The roast potatoes marked with a fork, oozing with deliciousness. Even the most simple of foods could be transformed into something quite marvellous wherever Grandma was concerned.

A few months before Halloween, Grandma's cooking became different. She started to burn her food accidentally, forgetting when they needed to be took out of the oven. Instead of adding eggs to a cake, she would add water, insisting it was the same. Her once delectable treats had become a thing of the past.

Then, Grandma took a turn for the worse. She started to forget who we were; her own family. She began to cry endlessly, pining for her former self. Yet I didn't realise it could get even worse.


I hope you like the first chapter, guys. It's a bit sad, and the title is rubbish, but I'll work on it. Please tell me what you think!
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Old 12-24-2014, 10:47 AM
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Thats actually really good! Keep it up!
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Old 12-24-2014, 11:31 AM
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Aw thanks so much. Didn't expect a reply so soon haha.
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This is looking great Neon, I want to hear more! c;
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Totally forgot I wrote this lol
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